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Thursday, May 8, 2008

got me thinking again...

I killed you a long time ago
But here I find myself
back to what I hate to love,
wondering,
WHY,
I missed u.
You exude all extremities,
You took me places
unheard,
unseen,
aware of my unconsciousness,
u raped my mind,
broke my heart
you slashed my tongue
I couldn’t utter a word.
Subconsciously dreaming of the conscious you,
You touched my heart with…


Dang…the feeling of…shit…lemme stop.

ML² you’re something else!

7 comments:

  1. I want to get into this private joke!

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  2. That's deep bro! Ki fanm kap fe w ekri bagay sa yo. En parlant de ca bro, I need you to write me a piece wi man. Hope it still costs the same.

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  3. G, prix ya monte wi. I am not in High school anymore.

    if you don't like my prices, get it somewhere else.

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  4. Wow!!! I always you had skills but this is deep. Love is a crazy thing; Since no one really responded, I hope your readers understood the metaphors.

    break this one down for me when you get a chance: "u raped my mind"; how did that happen?

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  5. Maggie
    Sorry it took a while to respond to your question... "you raped my mind"

    Love raped more than just my mind, it raped my soul, it turned me into someone else, it belittled me, and as a prideful individual, i hate that feeling. I am still being raped by it.

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  6. G
    Kiyes ki di w mwen tap pale de yon fanm???

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